Next, we have the review of psychologist
James Dixon (
Ѻ), author of the following view:
“Why does matter get up in the morning? If we except that matter is the constituent part of organisms, why does it bother to do anything at all? Why does it show us things that we call ‘agency’ or ‘intrinsic motivation’? What is it doing? Why does it care?”
— James Dixon (2020), “A Unifying Theory of Organisms”, Jun 22
which, to note, brings to mind the 2014 collaborative effort on the top of the “
thermodynamic lens” by chemical engineer
Marc Donohue and psychologist
Richard Kilburg; in any event, here is the review:
“This manuscript takes the position that large-scale social collectives or societies might be effectively understood from the perspective of ‘energy flow’. The authors provide a compact, but balanced review of major previous scholarship on this, and related, theses. They also quite fairly acknowledge the inherent limitations to such an approach, in terms of explaining all the nuances of culture, tradition, religion, and the like. The authors draw on well-established models in physics. and seek to rework them into a social framework The thrust of the manuscript is to outline how such a mapping between physical and social concepts might be profitably made, rather than demonstrating empirically the utility of the models. I found quite a bit to like about this manuscript. I think many researchers agree that at some fundamental level all phenomena in biology, including collective behavior, must be about energy flow. It is not yet clear how exactly to conceive of this relationship, but the current manuscript represents one thoughtful attempt to do so at a very large scale. I learned a lot reading it, and I think others will too.”
— James Dixon (2019), Complexity Review of Poudel and McGowan’s “Dynamics of Human Society Evolution”
Here, we have a good sober call (see:
two cultures call) for more papers like this in this area, coming respectively from a scholar in
humanities, aka the
Shakespeare culture of
C.P. Snow’s
two cultures world, which is in sharp contrast to the Anon review previous, a representative of the
Clausius culture of Snow’s world.
“I have the following suggestions for improving the manuscript. I think it would be helpful to spend more time defining the variables for the social field. I found myself not feeling like I fully understood the meaning of these variables, and the motivation for choosing them.”
— James Dixon (2019), Complexity Review of Poudel and McGowan’s “Dynamics of Human Society Evolution”
This is good advice. Poudel, by page two, e.g., has already introduced the acronym SFT for the phrase “social field theory”, but has not yet given a definition of what a “social field” is? Indeed, into the first few pages, it does not seem as if Poudel has defined one single "
variable", other than to say that a "
force is a gradient of the potential energy". It would seem to behoove Poudel, if his overall aim is to "propose the existence of a new type of 'force', especially among social beings, not fundamental as electromagnetic, gravity, strong nuclear, and weak nuclear", to spend a little more time defining variables like "energy", "force", "field", and "social field", as Dixon suggests?
“Likewise, the concept of energy seems to expand in the latter stages of the manuscript to include things like ‘information’. I found this perplexing, and would ask the authors to say more about how they are defining energy in their model.”
— James Dixon (2019), Complexity Review of Poudel and McGowan’s “Dynamics of Human Society Evolution”
This a red flag. Attempts to equate “
energy”, in units of joules (see:
SI unit geniuses), to “
information”, in units of
bits, is but a path down the
rabbit hole of Alice and Wonderland or a chase after the
Jabberwock of
Alfred Lotka (see:
Regarding Definitions).
“I was surprised that the concept of "money" did not feature more heavily in the manuscript. Perhaps it would be helpful for the authors could comment more fully on how they conceive of "money" in their framework.”
— James Dixon (2019), Complexity Review of Poudel and McGowan’s “Dynamics of Human Society Evolution”
Money,
energy, and
force is a difficult subject, to say the least.
Dynamics of Social Evolution | Annila Review Next, we have the third review by auto-characterized biophysicist
Arto Annila:
“Your paper does not look convincing with "Navier Stoke's" since it should be Navier-Stokes equation.”
— Arto Annila (2019), “Complexity Review of Poudel and McGowen’s “Dynamics of Human Society Evolution”
Here, Annila is saying that if you can’t even spell the surnames of the theorists
right, namely
Claude Navier and
George Stokes (not Stoke), in the abstract, how do you expect people to believe that you can build a whole new
social fluid theory on top of the original fluid theory?
“I don't see a scientific reason why you propose a new type of force and distinguish living from non-living. This goes against evidence which is my main reason to recommend rejection.”
— Arto Annila (2019), “Complexity Review of Poudel and McGowen’s “Dynamics of Human Society Evolution”
Here, Annila might be referring to this passage:
“Can energy flow alone create forms and structures? Or is structure/organization the basis of energy flowing through the system? Should such questions have a universal answer? Does the answer depend on whether we are talking about the living or non-living world?”
— Ram Poudel (2019), “Dynamics of Human Society Evolution” (pg. 6)
Here, also, we can reference Annila’s 2016 “Atomism Revisited” (
Ѻ), wherein the only point at which Annila employs the term “
life” is in the term “
lifetime” of subatomic particles. Hence, possibly, Annila thinks you are attempting to define a new force, like a “bio-force”, or “bio-energy” (see: bio-Gibbs energy), or “bio-field” that is unique to living domain of your “living / non-living” divide you seem to have situated?
“On the other hand, I favor your aim to write down an equation of motion. However, for me Newton's second law [see: laws of motion] in its original form F = dp/dt or in its integrated from TdS/dt = d(2K)/dt is good enough to explain social phenomena and behavior (google my homepage arto annila helsinki for publications). I also favor your style of writing by asking questions but to me, your knowledge in physics does not convince me. For example, Hamiltonian is per definition for a static system, whereas you are talking about evolving systems.”
— Arto Annila (2019), “Complexity Review of Poudel and McGowen’s “Dynamics of Human Society Evolution”
In this last part, Annilo makes a good point: on the surface of your paper, you presume to be jumping from
William Hamilton’s 1834 “On a general method in dynamics by which the study of the motions of all free systems of attracting or repelling points is reduced to the search and differentiation of one central relation, or characteristic function”, wherein the word
evolution is not employed, to explain not just evolution, but evolution of social systems? You should give a little pretext for this big JUMP, e.g. by citing:
Lawrence Henderson,
Harold Blum, or
Adriaan Lange.